The Winning Blog!
1st Place
Introductory Blog – Home Page
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We have a winner! Indeed, we do! The introductory blog or the home page has scored the highest amount of views.
Do I have magic powers? Indeed, I certainly wish ! No, I do not have powers, however, these blogs are more than magical!
I will highlight two major points that made my blog unique. Are you ready? LET’S GO!
- PERSONALITY: This blog incorporated aspects of my authentic personality, making it stand out from others. When writing a blog, it is imperative that our be yourself. Readers love to see your character through your words! The attention of the audience is captivated when you are displayed in your work. There is nobody in the work who can be you! Readers love to feel attached to the author and connect with your character.
- CREATIVY! IMAGINATION! AESTHETIC! : My introductory blog was a bowl of juicy soup! This soup entailed creativity, imagination and aesthetic! When writing a blog, you have to think outside of the box. Add spice and flavor to the blog. I am positive you would not enjoy eating freid chicken with no flavor! The creatvity, imagination, and aesthics are what makes your blog interesting. When writing, you have to take a curve, which makes your work stand out from others!
2nd Place
Beauty Behind Being Old
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The second runner up was my blog post about the elderly. To be honest, this blog wasy my favorite. I thoroughlly enjoyed working on this!
Want to know what made this blog the second runner up? LET’S GO!
Here are two special ingredients:
- PASSION: I love old people! Yes, that may sound weird, however it is the truth. I just love old people. This blog post became the second runner up because of my passion. When writing, you must be passionate about your work and the readers must be able to identify your passion as well. I literally put my heart, mind and soul into “Beauty Behind Being Old.” When readers see you are passionate about something, your work becomes more genuine!
- FUN: Just have fun! I had an immense amount of fun when writing this blog. That is a vital part of writing, you must just simply enjoy what you are doing. When you have fun and enjoy what you are doing, everything will flow better. You will work wih ease. Have you ever had ribs that could simply slide off the bone? Ahhh! That is how you should work, where eveything goes smoothly. Identify topics that you relate to and you will write better. Readers love work that flow!
3rd Place
About Jordan The Bahamian
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The third runner up was my about page. It was all about Jordan! I spent a lot of time on this page and crafted every word used.
Want to know what made this the 3rd runner up? LET’S GO!
Here are two key points:
- TIME: There was a lot of time and dedication placed into the blog written about me. I spent time trying to craft each word and concept. When writing, it is important that you spent time on your work. If you work is rushed, your readers will know! Spending time on your work make is clear and thorough. Nobody likes rushed work! Can you imagine your favorite pizza being rushed? It would not be too appealing! When you want something to come out good, you must take time with it.
- VOICE: Let your voice be heard! I made it my job to show my voice in this piece of work. Readers love to see and hear your voice! I love poetry, therefore, this blog was poetic. Poetry allows my voice to be heard. When writing, you want to identify the ways your voice can be heard. Letting the readers hear your voice is key, when wanting to personalize your work. If your blog has no voice, then a vital part of the pie is missing!.
We imagine – this !
Will it come true?
Parts of our lives, making us feel anew.
Cast your fears away,
Vividly paint a picture, one you constantly replay.
Like a pink helium balloon, rising on the shoulders on the wind.
No sound of man, just the voice within.
It is the song we rewind in our head,
It goes non-stop and even sometimes unsaid.
We envision the wonders and aspects of mankind,
Where goals, hopes and aspirations turn over in one’s mind.
Now close your eyes and tell me what you see,
Is it power, strength and dignity?
I speak about dreams, a vital aspect of our lives.
The drive that makes us stronger and never give up the fight.
Dream because no man can stop us,
There is no weapon formed that will prosper.
Dream when the eyes fail to see light,
When man is blinded by the struggles of life.
I need you to dream, because there is a better tomorrow,
A day will come and there will be no more sorrow.
Close your eyes and take a breath,
Envision genuine serenity and happiness.
An endless journey, one so mighty,
Hope for the lost, depressed and poverty.
A dream is not an illusion,
But a bed of clouds which carries our ambition.
Dream on until the end,
Until all worries of this earth seem to descend.
– Jordan Alise
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